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                    【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【过】【得】【真】【快】【,】【又】【到】【周】【末】【了】【,】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【皎】【洁】【的】【月】【光】【,】【我】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【—】【—】【那】【个】【曾】【留】【下】【我】【童】【年】【记】【忆】【的】【地】【方】【。】【(】【开】【头】【直】【接】【点】【出】【心】【中】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【很】【好】【地】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【印】【象】【中】【的】【家】【乡】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【。】【它】【四】【通】【八】【达】【,】【幽】【深】【曲】【折】【,】【宛】【若】【一】【张】【脉】【络】【分】【明】【的】【网】【。】【每】【一】【条】【小】【巷】【都】【铺】【着】【青】【石】【板】【,】【两】【边】【是】【低】【矮】【而】【拥】【挤】【的】【小】【阁】【楼】【,】【屋】【檐】【向】【前】【挑】【着】【,】【显】【得】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【,】【似】【乎】【与】【外】【面】【的】【喧】【闹】【、】【繁】【华】【极】【不】【协】【调】【。】【(】【这】【里】【重】【点】【介】【绍】【小】【巷】【中】【的】【屋】【檐】【,】【突】【出】【了】【其】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【之】【美】【。】【)】【然】【而】【,】【当】【你】【独】【行】【在】【小】【巷】【时】【,】【听】【着】【脚】【踏】【青】【石】【板】【发】【出】【的】【“】【啪】【啪】【”】【声】【和】【水】【滴】【的】【溅】【落】【声】【,】【再】【向】【前】【望】【,】【小】【巷】【尽】【头】【透】【着】【时】【隐】【时】【现】【的】【灯】【光】【,】【你】【会】【忽】【然】【感】【到】【一】【阵】【舒】【畅】【,】【一】【阵】【温】【馨】【。】【(】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【,】【尽】【展】【小】【巷】【清】【新】【、】【幽】【深】【之】【美】【。】【)】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【清】【新】【、】【自】【然】【,】【不】【加】【任】【何】【修】【饰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【巷】【里】【的】【热】【闹】【景】【象】【是】【永】【远】【让】【人】【怀】【念】【的】【。】【每】【到】【傍】【晚】【,】【忙】【碌】【了】【一】【天】【的】【人】【们】【回】【到】【家】【,】【听】【吧】【,】【小】【巷】【会】【奏】【出】【一】【首】【锅】【碗】【瓢】【盆】【交】【响】【曲】【。】【接】【着】【,】【一】【股】【夹】【杂】【着】【各】【种】【味】【道】【的】【气】【味】【便】【弥】【漫】【在】【狭】【窄】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【了】【。】【(】【这】【里】【综】【合】【调】【动】【视】【觉】【、】【听】【觉】【、】【嗅】【觉】【等】【感】【觉】【,】【表】【现】【了】【小】【巷】【生】【活】【的】【热】【闹】【和】【温】【馨】【,】【读】【来】【让】【人】【神】【往】【。】【)】【孩】【子】【们】【在】【天】【井】【里】【追】【逐】【打】【闹】【:】【有】【的】【逗】【着】【小】【狗】【乱】【窜】【,】【有】【的】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【正】【玩】【儿】【得】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【,】【有】【的】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【地】【偷】【摘】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【的】【鸟】【笼】【…】【…】【嬉】【笑】【打】【闹】【为】【平】【静】【的】【小】【巷】【注】【入】【了】【活】【力】【。】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【仰】【面】【躺】【在】【太】【师】【椅】【上】【,】【悠】【然】【地】【听】【着】【收】【音】【机】【,】【不】【时】【地】【哼】【上】【几】【句】【…】【…】【此】【时】【,】【小】【巷】【又】【像】【一】【张】【风】【情】【画】【,】【没】【有】【什】【么】【大】【红】【大】【绿】【,】【却】【透】【着】【一】【股】【朴】【实】【—】【—】【朴】【实】【的】【人】【,】【朴】【实】【的】【生】【活】【。】【(】【景】【物】【描】【写】【之】【后】【,】【简】【要】【地】【以】【景】【寓】【情】【,】【既】【表】【现】【了】【作】【者】【对】【小】【巷】【的】【无】【限】【热】【爱】【之】【情】【,】【也】【有】【力】【地】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【起】【小】【巷】【,】【我】【小】【时】【候】【安】【静】【地】【靠】【在】【奶】【奶】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【乘】【凉】【的】【情】【景】【又】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【浮】【现】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【晚】【上】【,】【人】【们】【都】【歇】【了】【,】【小】【巷】【显】【得】【很】【寂】【静】【,】【只】【有】【一】【些】【小】【虫】【仍】【然】【不】【闲】【着】【。】【我】【依】【偎】【在】【奶】【奶】【怀】【中】【,】【望】【着】【黑】【洞】【洞】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【无】【边】【无】【际】【。】【这】【时】【,】【月】【亮】【已】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【爬】【上】【来】【,】【淡】【淡】【的】【月】【光】【泻】【在】【石】【板】【路】【上】【,】【像】【一】【盆】【水】【泼】【在】【上】【面】【,】【静】【静】【地】【滚】【动】【。】【奶】【奶】【一】【边】【轻】【轻】【摇】【着】【蒲】【扇】【,】【一】【边】【哼】【着】【儿】【歌】【。】【一】【阵】【微】【风】【带】【着】【花】【儿】【淡】【淡】【的】【清】【香】【拂】【过】【面】【庞】【,】【我】【真】【要】【醉】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【仿】【佛】【是】【大】【海】【中】【泊】【着】【的】【一】【叶】【小】【舟】【,】【而】【我】【就】【躺】【在】【它】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【。】【月】【光】【像】【为】【我】【盖】【上】【一】【层】【薄】【被】【,】【船】【在】【轻】【轻】【摇】【动】【,】【我】【的】【心】【也】【随】【之】【微】【微】【荡】【漾】【…】【…】【(】【比】【喻】【新】【奇】【而】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【无】【尽】【的】【联】【想】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【虫】【声】【啾】【啾】【,】【叫】【醒】【了】【我】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【离】【开】【家】【乡】【已】【好】【几】【年】【了】【,】【再】【也】【听】【不】【见】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【,】【再】【也】【看】【不】【到】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【小】【巷】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【吗】【?】【奶】【奶】【依】【旧】【在】【月】【夜】【下】【哼】【着】【歌】【吗】【?】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【奶】【奶】【老】【了】【;】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【我】【已】【难】【得】【再】【见】【了】【,】【只】【有】【月】【光】【依】【旧】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【什】【么】【时】【候】【再】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【呢】【?】【(】【结】【尾】【既】【回】【应】【了】【标】【题】【,】【也】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【,】【达】【到】【了】【言】【有】【尽】【而】【意】【无】【穷】【的】【效】【果】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【评】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【优】【美】【的】【写】【景】【抒】【情】【的】【佳】【作】【。】【文】【章】【由】【表】【及】【里】【,】【由】【物】【到】【人】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【对】【家】【乡】【及】【亲】【人】【的】【思】【念】【之】【情】【,】【感】【染】【力】【很】【强】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【在】【写】【作】【上】【有】【一】【个】【鲜】【明】【的】【特】【点】【,】【那】【就】【是】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【非】【常】【形】【象】【具】【体】【的】【感】【受】【。】【文】【章】【描】【写】【小】【巷】【既】【调】【动】【了】【各】【种】【感】【觉】【来】【展】【现】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【点】【,】【又】【综】【合】【运】【用】【各】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【来】【突】【出】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【征】【,】【读】【来】【我】【们】【也】【仿】【佛】【置】【身】【于】【小】【巷】【之】【中】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【之】【感】【。】

                    【<】【p】【>】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【明】【月】【几】【时】【有】【,】【但】【愿】【共】【婵】【娟】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【一】【句】【表】【团】【圆】【的】【市】【局】【能】【否】【是】【那】【最】【深】【处】【的】【心】【勇】【气】【思】【念】【的】【情】【?】【人】【生】【有】【太】【多】【的】【悲】【欢】【离】【合】【,】【总】【有】【那】【么】【一】【个】【人】【值】【得】【你】【去】【思】【念】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】中英南京条约【<】【p】【>】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【孝】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【为】【我】【们】【孝】【感】【的】【一】【大】【特】【色】【,】【孝】【感】【之】【所】【以】【被】【人】【们】【称】【为】【孝】【文】【化】【名】【城】【,】【是】【因】【为】【孝】【感】【有】【着】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【孝】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【的】【底】【蕴】【。】【以】【孝】【感】【为】【地】【点】【,】【发】【生】【在】【董】【永】【卖】【身】【葬】【父】【的】【故】【事】【更】【是】【感】【动】【了】【上】【天】【,】【奠】【定】【了】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【孝】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【的】【基】【础】【。】【我】【们】【前】【人】【拥】【有】【一】【颗】【孝】【之】【心】【,】【但】【随】【着】【时】【代】【的】【进】【步】【,】【人】【的】【思】【想】【也】【在】【不】【断】【进】【步】【,】【我】【们】【还】【能】【不】【拥】【有】【一】【颗】【孝】【之】【心】【吗】【?】【所】【以】【写】【下】【一】【封】【爱】【书】【,】【随】【着】【孝】【心】【,】【温】【暖】【送】【回】【故】【居】【。】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【孝】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【是】【一】【个】【人】【应】【该】【拥】【有】【的】【最】【基】【本】【的】【品】【质】【,】【但】【有】【人】【却】【丧】【失】【了】【这】【一】【品】【质】【。】【孟】【子】【曾】【说】【过】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【世】【俗】【所】【谓】【不】【孝】【者】【五】【,】【惰】【其】【四】【支】【,】【不】【顾】【父】【母】【之】【养】【,】【一】【不】【孝】【也】【;】【博】【奕】【好】【饮】【酒】【,】【不】【顾】【父】【母】【之】【养】【,】【二】【不】【孝】【也】【;】【好】【货】【财】【,】【私】【妻】【子】【,】【不】【顾】【父】【母】【之】【养】【,】【三】【不】【孝】【也】【;】【从】【耳】【目】【之】【欲】【,】【以】【为】【父】【母】【戮】【,】【四】【不】【孝】【也】【;】【好】【勇】【斗】【狠】【,】【以】【危】【父】【母】【,】【五】【不】【孝】【也】【。】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【想】【要】【成】【为】【一】【个】【孝】【顺】【的】【人】【,】【不】【仅】【仅】【只】【是】【避】【免】【孟】【子】【所】【说】【的】【五】【不】【孝】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【还】【是】【要】【拥】【有】【一】【颗】【爱】【父】【母】【的】【心】【,】【所】【以】【写】【一】【封】【家】【书】【来】【表】【明】【自】【己】【的】【一】【片】【孝】【心】【吧】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

                    【<】【p】【>】【家】【书】【突】【然】【多】【了】【一】【个】【圆】【形】【的】【泪】【痕】【,】【他】【连】【忙】【擦】【干】【泪】【水】【,】【又】【写】【了】【很】【多】【对】【家】【里】【人】【的】【思】【念】【,】【心】【绪】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【<】【/】【p】【>】中英南京条约【<】【p】【>】【还】【有】【沉】【香】【开】【山】【救】【母】【的】【故】【事】【。】【跟】【有】【股】【人】【味】【了】【自】【己】【的】【母】【亲】【,】【辞】【官】【不】【做】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

                    中英南京条约:瑞星:顺手机病毒新变种募化身“中国移触动”盗凹隐私

                    【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【过】【得】【真】【快】【,】【又】【到】【周】【末】【了】【,】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【皎】【洁】【的】【月】【光】【,】【我】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【印】【象】【中】【的】【家】【乡】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【。】【它】【四】【通】【八】【达】【,】【幽】【深】【曲】【折】【,】【宛】【若】【一】【张】【脉】【络】【分】【明】【的】【网】【。】【(】【“】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【”】【,】【它】【美】【在】【什】【么】【地】【方】【呢】【?】【仅】【仅】【表】【现】【在】【“】【四】【通】【八】【达】【,】【幽】【深】【曲】【折】【”】【吗】【?】【显】【然】【作】【者】【这】【里】【描】【写】【得】【不】【细】【腻】【,】【没】【有】【把】【小】【巷】【的】【美】【描】【写】【出】【来】【,】【反】【映】【出】【来】【。】【)】【小】【巷】【里】【的】【热】【闹】【景】【象】【是】【永】【远】【让】【人】【怀】【念】【的】【。】【每】【到】【傍】【晚】【,】【忙】【碌】【了】【一】【天】【的】【人】【们】【回】【到】【家】【,】【听】【吧】【,】【小】【巷】【会】【奏】【出】【一】【首】【锅】【碗】【瓢】【盆】【交】【响】【曲】【。】【接】【着】【,】【一】【股】【夹】【杂】【着】【各】【种】【味】【道】【的】【气】【味】【便】【弥】【漫】【在】【狭】【窄】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【了】【。】【孩】【子】【们】【在】【天】【井】【里】【追】【逐】【打】【闹】【:】【有】【的】【逗】【着】【小】【狗】【乱】【窜】【,】【有】【的】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【正】【玩】【儿】【得】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【,】【有】【的】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【地】【偷】【摘】【老】【头】【们】【的】【鸟】【笼】【…】【…】【其】【中】【最】【有】【意】【思】【的】【是】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【。】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【是】【具】【有】【浓】【厚】【东】【方】【色】【彩】【的】【文】【化】【生】【活】【,】【也】【是】【中】【国】【的】【艺】【术】【。】【人】【们】【对】【蛐】【蛐】【从】【原】【先】【的】【听】【其】【声】【,】【发】【展】【到】【现】【在】【的】【观】【其】【斗】【,】【从】【这】【一】【微】【小】【的】【侧】【面】【,】【也】【反】【映】【了】【社】【会】【历】【史】【的】【变】【化】【。】【蛐】【蛐】【相】【斗】【,】【要】【挑】【重】【量】【与】【大】【小】【差】【不】【多】【的】【,】【用】【蒸】【熟】【后】【特】【制】【的】【日】【菣】【草】【或】【马】【尾】【鬃】【引】【斗】【,】【让】【它】【们】【互】【相】【较】【量】【,】【几】【经】【交】【锋】【,】【败】【的】【退】【却】【,】【胜】【的】【张】【翅】【长】【鸣】【。】【(】【本】【文】【的】【标】【题】【是】【“】【难】【忘】【的】【家】【乡】【小】【巷】【”】【,】【这】【里】【却】【大】【写】【特】【写】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【,】【显】【然】【与】【中】【心】【不】【符】【,】【远】【离】【了】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【。】【因】【此】【,】【这】【里】【还】【应】【把】【重】【点】【放】【在】【描】【写】【小】【巷】【景】【色】【上】【。】【)】【孩】【子】【的】【嬉】【笑】【打】【闹】【为】【平】【静】【的】【小】【巷】【注】【入】【了】【活】【力】【。】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【仰】【面】【躺】【在】【太】【师】【椅】【上】【,】【悠】【然】【地】【听】【着】【收】【音】【机】【,】【不】【时】【地】【哼】【上】【几】【句】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【起】【小】【巷】【,】【我】【小】【时】【候】【安】【静】【地】【靠】【在】【奶】【奶】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【乘】【凉】【的】【情】【景】【又】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【浮】【现】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【晚】【上】【,】【人】【们】【都】【歇】【了】【,】【小】【巷】【显】【得】【很】【寂】【静】【,】【只】【有】【一】【些】【小】【虫】【仍】【然】【不】【闲】【着】【。】【我】【依】【偎】【在】【奶】【奶】【怀】【中】【,】【望】【着】【黑】【洞】【洞】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【无】【边】【无】【际】【的】【。】【这】【条】【小】【巷】【非】【常】【热】【闹】【,】【清】【早】【起】【来】【就】【可】【听】【到】【小】【贩】【的】【叫】【卖】【声】【,】【菠】【菜】【、】【黄】【瓜】【、】【韭】【菜】【、】【芹】【菜】【、】【草】【莓】【这】【些】【蔬】【菜】【水】【果】【都】【被】【摆】【到】【了】【小】【摊】【上】【,】【人】【们】【争】【相】【购】【买】【,】【小】【贩】【忙】【得】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【,】【并】【且】【十】【分】【快】【乐】【。】【(】【这】【里】【的】【描】【写】【给】【人】【一】【种】【怪】【怪】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【这】【一】【段】【开】【始】【说】【“】【晚】【上】【,】【人】【们】【都】【歇】【了】【”】【,】【而】【这】【里】【又】【写】【“】【这】【条】【小】【巷】【非】【常】【热】【闹】【。】【清】【早】【起】【来】【就】【可】【听】【到】【小】【贩】【的】【叫】【卖】【声】【”】【。】【这】【里】【作】【者】【的】【写】【作】【顺】【序】【安】【排】【得】【显】【然】【,】【有】【点】【儿】【混】【乱】【。】【另】【外】【,】【这】【里】【的】【描】【写】【与】【开】【头】【的】【“】【安】【静】【地】【靠】【在】【奶】【奶】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【”】【的】【气】【氛】【有】【点】【儿】【不】【吻】【合】【。】【)】【我】【沉】【浸】【在】【这】【优】【美】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【,】【也】【沉】【浸】【在】【幸】【福】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【虫】【声】【啾】【啾】【,】【叫】【醒】【了】【我】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【离】【开】【家】【乡】【已】【好】【几】【年】【了】【,】【再】【也】【听】【不】【见】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【,】【再】【也】【看】【不】【到】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【小】【巷】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【吗】【?】【奶】【奶】【依】【旧】【在】【月】【夜】【下】【哼】【着】【歌】【吗】【?】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【奶】【奶】【老】【了】【;】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【我】【已】【难】【得】【再】【见】【了】【,】【只】【有】【月】【光】【依】【旧】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【什】【么】【时】【候】【再】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【呢】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【指】【导】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【写】【得】【有】【浓】【郁】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【有】【温】【馨】【的】【人】【情】【味】【,】【这】【是】【小】【作】【者】【成】【功】【的】【地】【方】【。】【但】【本】【文】【在】【写】【作】【上】【也】【有】【明】【显】【的】【缺】【点】【,】【具】【体】【表】【现】【在】【如】【下】【方】【面】【:】【一】【是】【观】【察】【不】【细】【,】【描】【写】【不】【美】【。】【正】【如】【作】【者】【所】【说】【“】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【”】【,】【但】【这】【美】【表】【现】【在】【什】【么】【地】【方】【呢】【?】【它】【们】【的】【布】【局】【如】【何】【,】【有】【什】【么】【景】【物】【呢】【?】【这】【些】【作】【者】【都】【没】【有】【写】【出】【来】【,】【因】【此】【小】【巷】【也】【不】【能】【给】【人】【美】【的】【感】【受】【;】【二】【是】【部】【分】【内】【容】【远】【离】【了】【中】【心】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【主】【题】【不】【够】【鲜】【明】【。】【这】【一】【点】【主】【要】【表】【现】【在】【作】【者】【介】【绍】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【的】【那】【些】【文】【字】【,】【这】【些】【还】【请】【小】【作】【者】【思】【考】【一】【下】【,】【看】【如】【何】【处】【理】【这】【些】【文】【字】【才】【能】【更】【好】【地】【表】【现】【小】【巷】【之】【美】【,】【才】【能】【更】【好】【地】【突】【出】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】中英南京条约【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【是】【中】【考】【语】【文】【试】【卷】【中】【的】【“】【半】【壁】【江】【山】【”】【,】【它】【需】【要】【精】【益】【求】【精】【,】【才】【能】【在】【众】【多】【优】【秀】【作】【文】【中】【脱】【颖】【而】【出】【。】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【青】【睐】【,】【从】【而】【获】【取】【高】【分】【。】【纵】【观】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【,】【不】【难】【发】【现】【,】【文】【章】【中】【无】【不】【闪】【烁】【着】【一】【个】【“】【精】【”】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【精】【深】【的】【主】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【主】【题】【是】【文】【章】【的】【灵】【魂】【,】【作】【文】【没】【有】【高】【远】【的】【主】【题】【就】【会】【显】【得】【低】【俗】【浅】【薄】【。】【只】【有】【积】【极】【、】【精】【深】【的】【主】【题】【才】【会】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【赏】【识】【。】【如】【湖】【南】【邵】【阳】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【》】【就】【是】【撷】【取】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【片】【断】【,】【通】【过】【描】【写】【“】【一】【句】【叮】【咛】【”】【“】【一】【份】【关】【怀】【”】【来】【体】【现】【赞】【美】【美】【好】【生】【活】【的】【大】【主】【题】【。】【又】【如】【湖】【北】【荆】【州】【市】【某】【考】【生】【的】【《】【聆】【听】【生】【命】【拔】【节】【的】【声】【音】【》】【,】【就】【是】【用】【“】【童】【稚】【之】【声】【—】【—】【短】【笛】【无】【腔】【信】【口】【吹】【”】【“】【豆】【蔻】【之】【声】【—】【—】【羌】【笛】【何】【须】【怨】【杨】【柳】【”】【“】【花】【季】【之】【声】【—】【—】【玉】【笛】【叫】【空】【阔】【”】【三】【个】【小】【标】【题】【,】【写】【出】【自】【己】【“】【童】【稚】【”】【时】【喜】【欢】【吃】【田】【鸡】【肉】【,】【“】【豆】【蔻】【”】【时】【懂】【得】【青】【蛙】【是】【益】【类】【动】【物】【,】【“】【花】【季】【”】【时】【却】【积】【极】【宣】【传】【保】【护】【青】【蛙】【及】【有】【益】【动】【物】【。】【这】【成】【长】【的】【声】【音】【吹】【响】【了】【“】【保】【护】【生】【态】【”】【这】【一】【大】【主】【题】【,】【从】【而】【夺】【得】【高】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【,】【我】【们】【同】【样】【也】【可】【以】【从】【极】【其】【普】【通】【的】【身】【边】【小】【事】【中】【挖】【掘】【出】【鲜】【明】【深】【刻】【的】【主】【题】【。】【如】【汇】【聚】【厚】【重】【历】【史】【的】【老】【传】【统】【;】【凝】【聚】【时】【代】【气】【息】【的】【新】【气】【象】【;】【颂】【扬】【祖】【国】【河】【山】【的】【美】【好】【;】【倡】【导】【绿】【色】【环】【保】【的】【重】【要】【…】【…】【总】【之】【,】【生】【活】【的】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【可】【以】【使】【我】【们】【的】【作】【文】【异】【彩】【纷】【呈】【,】【意】【蕴】【厚】【重】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【精】【妙】【的】【开】【头】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【常】【言】【道】【“】【明】【眸】【善】【睐】【第】【一】【瞥】【”】【。】【文】【章】【如】【果】【有】【~】【个】【精】【妙】【的】【开】【头】【,】【就】【会】【吸】【引】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【球】【,】【让】【人】【有】【一】【种】【赏】【心】【悦】【目】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【全】【国】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【中】【有】【这】【样】【几】【种】【成】【功】【的】【开】【头】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【环】【境】【渲】【染】【气】【氛】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【死】【了】【,】【黑】【暗】【统】【治】【着】【这】【个】【世】【界】【,】【灯】【光】【死】【去】【时】【发】【出】【的】【凄】【惨】【叫】【声】【还】【在】【空】【中】【荡】【漾】【,】【虽】【然】【声】【音】【很】【低】【却】【是】【无】【处】【不】【在】【,】【角】【落】【里】【也】【似】【乎】【有】【极】【其】【低】【微】【的】【哭】【泣】【。】【手】【捧】【着】【一】【张】【张】【写】【满】【愁】【容】【的】【试】【卷】【让】【我】【感】【到】【未】【来】【的】【渺】【茫】【,】【欢】【乐】【的】【时】【期】【已】【经】【过】【去】【,】【现】【在】【是】【悲】【戚】【的】【时】【候】【了】【。】【(】【《】【看】【着】【前】【方】【》】【牡】【丹】【江】【市】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【开】【篇】【环】【境】【描】【写】【的】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【,】【创】【设】【了】【一】【种】【独】【特】【的】【意】【境】【,】【已】【将】【人】【物】【内】【心】【展】【现】【得】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【,】【扣】【住】【了】【读】【者】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【名】【言】【诗】【句】【引】【用】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【孙】【子】【兵】【法】【》】【云】【:】【千】【千】【为】【敌】【,】【一】【人】【胜】【之】【,】【未】【若】【自】【胜】【,】【为】【战】【中】【上】【。】【(】【《】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【百】【战】【不】【殆】【》】【广】【西】【河】【池】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【篇】【即】【引】【用】【了】【《】【孙】【子】【兵】【法】【》】【中】【的】【名】【句】【来】【表】【达】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【有】【着】【纲】【举】【目】【张】【的】【作】【用】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【设】【问】【反】【问】【悬】【念】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【条】【街】【你】【熟】【悉】【吗】【?】【熟】【悉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【聆】【听】【到】【这】【街】【的】【声】【音】【吗】【?】【没】【有】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【欣】【赏】【过】【这】【街】【的】【美】【景】【吗】【?】【没】【有】【。】【(】【《】【熟】【悉】【的】【地】【方】【也】【有】【风】【景】【》】【苏】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【以】【设】【问】【句】【起】【笔】【,】【开】【篇】【就】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【,】【老】【街】【既】【然】【熟】【悉】【,】【却】【为】【什】【么】【没】【有】【聆】【听】【过】【声】【音】【也】【没】【有】【欣】【赏】【过】【美】【景】【?】【这】【不】【是】【与】【文】【章】【题】【目】【矛】【盾】【吗】【?】【开】【篇】【就】【激】【发】【着】【读】【者】【的】【阅】【读】【兴】【趣】【。】【这】【也】【自】【然】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【开】【宗】【明】【义】【题】【记】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爱】【,】【无】【声】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【天】【空】【;】【爱】【,】【无】【言】【,】【滋】【润】【了】【心】【田】【。】【多】【想】【留】【住】【一】【段】【时】【光】【,】【留】【住】【你】【的】【容】【颜】【。】【你】【的】【馈】【赠】【如】【那】【滔】【滔】【江】【水】【,】【一】【生】【用】【之】【不】【竭】【。】【—】【—】【题】【记】【(】【《】【父】【亲】【的】【馈】【赠】【》】【山】【东】【淄】【博】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【题】【记】【,】【把】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【表】【达】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【5】【.】【自】【然】【起】【笔】【点】【题】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【种】【把】【事】【情】【的】【开】【头】【作】【为】【文】【章】【开】【头】【的】【自】【然】【起】【笔】【法】【,】【它】【的】【风】【格】【朴】【素】【自】【然】【,】【有】【韵】【味】【天】【成】【的】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【学】【校】【三】【令】【五】【申】【说】【不】【准】【带】【手】【机】【到】【校】【,】【你】【们】【家】【长】【为】【什】【么】【老】【是】【纵】【容】【孩】【子】【,】【不】【与】【学】【校】【保】【持】【一】【致】【呢】【?】【”】【老】【师】【最】【后】【几】【句】【话】【几】【乎】【是】【吼】【出】【来】【的】【,】【满】【含】【不】【满】【与】【责】【备】【。】【妈】【妈】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【赔】【着】【不】【是】【,】【那】【神】【情】【那】【态】【度】【那】【是】【她】【平】【常】【的】【样】【子】【吗】【?】【(】【《】【拥】【抱】【》】【四】【川】【成】【都】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【开】【头】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【,】【一】【下】【子】【就】【将】【读】【者】【带】【入】【了】【情】【境】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【精】【瑟】【的】【精】【节】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【文】【似】【看】【山】【不】【喜】【平】【”】【,】【精】【彩】【的】【情】【节】【仿】【佛】【引】【领】【读】【者】【在】【旖】【旎】【风】【光】【中】【穿】【行】【,】【或】【“】【柳】【暗】【花】【明】【又】【一】【村】【”】【或】【“】【横】【看】【成】【岭】【侧】【成】【峰】【”】【或】【“】【曲】【径】【通】【幽】【处】【”】【,】【使】【读】【者】【在】【曲】【折】【与】【起】【伏】【中】【心】【潮】【澎】【湃】【,】【获】【得】【无】【限】【乐】【趣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【为】【了】【优】【化】【情】【节】【,】【追】【求】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【,】【有】【些】【作】【品】【或】【张】【弛】【有】【度】【或】【悬】【念】【迭】【起】【,】【或】【虚】【实】【相】【生】【或】【双】【线】【交】【替】【。】【跌】【宕】【起】【伏】【的】【情】【节】【使】【故】【事】【波】【澜】【起】【伏】【,】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【“】【情】【节】【突】【转】【”】【的】【手】【法】【,】【令】【人】【拍】【案】【叫】【绝】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【期】【末】【考】【试】【到】【了】【,】【我】【聚】【精】【会】【神】【地】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【复】【习】【着】【。】【不】【知】【何】【时】【,】【阳】【光】【笼】【罩】【了】【我】【,】【使】【我】【额】【头】【沁】【出】【了】【汗】【珠】【。】【这】【时】【,】【数】【学】【老】【师】【又】【一】【次】【敲】【响】【了】【我】【的】【桌】【子】【:】【“】【你】【,】【坐】【到】【那】【边】【去】【考】【试】【。】【”】【我】【愣】【住】【了】【。】【老】【师】【竟】【然】【对】【我】【如】【此】【不】【信】【任】【!】【老】【师】【对】【我】【的】【成】【见】【竟】【然】【有】【这】【么】【深】【!】【我】【再】【也】【忍】【耐】【不】【住】【,】【泪】【水】【就】【要】【冲】【出】【眼】【眶】【了】【。】【老】【师】【也】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【随】【即】【,】【他】【似】【乎】【明】【白】【了】【什】【么】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【这】【里】【太】【晒】【,】【影】【响】【你】【做】【题】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【如】【此】【。】【原】【本】【以】【为】【老】【师】【误】【解】【了】【我】【,】【谁】【知】【却】【是】【我】【误】【解】【了】【老】【师】【!】【我】【的】【泪】【水】【不】【由】【得】【流】【了】【出】【来】【…】【…】【(】【《】【阳】【光】【灿】【烂】【的】【日】【子】【》】【山】【东】【济】【南】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【是】【一】【件】【考】【试】【时】【调】【换】【座】【位】【的】【平】【常】【小】【事】【,】【被】【作】【者】【精】【心】【打】【造】【后】【,】【使】【文】【章】【前】【后】【隋】【节】【突】【转】【,】【波】【澜】【顿】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【精】【当】【的】【措】【词】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【山】【不】【在】【高】【,】【有】【仙】【则】【名】【;】【水】【不】【在】【深】【,】【有】【龙】【则】【灵】【”】【。】【作】【文】【中】【的】【措】【词】【更】【不】【在】【多】【,】【精】【当】【的】【措】【词】【有】【着】【“】【四】【两】【拨】【千】【斤】【”】【的】【显】【著】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【白】【驹】【过】【隙】【般】【滑】【过】【爸】【爸】【的】【背】【,】【掠】【过】【爷】【爷】【的】【胡】【子】【,】【穿】【过】【我】【的】【指】【间】【,】【而】【我】【的】【那】【颗】【童】【心】【也】【慢】【慢】【成】【长】【了】【。】【(】【《】【长】【大】【的】【童】【心】【》】【浙】【江】【温】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【滑】【”】【“】【掠】【”】【“】【穿】【”】【三】【个】【动】【词】【生】【动】【地】【展】【现】【了】【时】【光】【飞】【逝】【,】【“】【我】【”】【的】【童】【心】【就】【在】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【中】【长】【大】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【天】【空】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【风】【雨】【雷】【电】【的】【一】【时】【肆】【虐】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【辽】【阔】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【大】【海】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【惊】【涛】【骇】【浪】【的】【一】【时】【猖】【獗】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【深】【邃】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【森】【林】【不】【宽】【容】【。】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【弱】【肉】【强】【食】【的】【一】【时】【规】【律】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【原】【始】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【宇】【宙】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【星】【座】【裂】【变】【的】【一】【时】【更】【替】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【神】【秘】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【时】【间】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【各】【色】【人】【等】【的】【一】【时】【虚】【掷】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【延】【续】【之】【美】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【宽】【容】【成】【就】【了】【它】【们】【。】【(】【《】【告】【别】【狭】【隘】【之】【心】【》】【一】【考】【毕】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【段】【文】【字】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【用】【词】【精】【练】【,】【运】【用】【铺】【陈】【排】【比】【的】【手】【法】【,】【使】【文】【章】【更】【具】【思】【维】【的】【深】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【精】【练】【的】【叙】【述】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【或】【用】【巧】【妙】【的】【手】【法】【,】【或】【用】【恰】【当】【的】【顺】【序】【,】【使】【叙】【述】【顺】【畅】【精】【彩】【,】【但】【这】【并】【不】【意】【味】【着】【叙】【述】【得】【越】【多】【越】【好】【,】【而】【是】【以】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【为】【妙】【。】【只】【有】【内】【涵】【深】【刻】【、】【情】【节】【生】【动】【、】【能】【突】【出】【主】【题】【的】【具】【体】【材】【料】【才】【详】【写】【,】【次】【要】【作】【用】【的】【内】【容】【就】【只】【能】【作】【概】【括】【叙】【述】【。】【精】【练】【的】【叙】【述】【使】【文】【章】【清】【晰】【利】【落】【,】【结】【构】【紧】【凑】【。】【如】【南】【京】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【也】【是】【一】【堂】【语】【文】【课】【》】【是】【从】【不】【同】【角】【度】【选】【择】【典】【型】【事】【例】【来】【突】【出】【中】【心】【的】【。】【有】【给】【网】【上】【的】【信】【箱】【发】【勘】【误】【信】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【自】【豪】【感】【受】【;】【有】【参】【加】【学】【校】【艺】【术】【节】【的】【朗】【诵】【表】【演】【活】【动】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【成】【果】【;】【有】【春】【节】【家】【庭】【联】【欢】【会】【接】【对】【联】【比】【赛】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【三】【件】【事】【例】【紧】【扣】【生】【活】【“】【也】【是】【一】【堂】【语】【文】【课】【”】【这】【一】【中】【心】【,】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【又】【详】【略】【有】【致】【。】【其】【中】【第】【三】【件】【事】【最】【有】【代】【表】【性】【,】【也】【很】【风】【趣】【,】【作】【者】【就】【突】【出】【的】【对】【话】【与】【心】【理】【进】【行】【详】【写】【,】【而】【其】【他】【两】【事】【就】【略】【写】【。】【这】【样】【精】【练】【的】【处】【理】【有】【助】【于】【凸】【现】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【。】

                    【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【想】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【离】【别】【会】【是】【背】【影】【的】【凝】【望】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【把】【身】【躯】【站】【成】【树】【的】【形】【象】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【任】【眼】【泪】【奔】【涌】【、】【泛】【滥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【想】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【离】【别】【会】【是】【心】【的】【涅】【槃】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【需】【要】【时】【间】【的】【营】【养】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【让】【它】【诞】【生】【、】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【我】【站】【在】【六】【月】【的】【路】【口】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【整】【理】【着】【远】【方】【的】【行】【囊】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【情】【却】【格】【外】【的】【晴】【朗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【电】【话】【里】【欣】【喜】【地】【告】【诉】【爹】【娘】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【毕】【业】【升】【学】【明】【朗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【年】【里】【,】【恩】【师】【的】【语】【重】【心】【长】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【足】【够】【支】【撑】【我】【们】【一】【辈】【子】【的】【飞】【翔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【年】【啊】【,】【教】【学】【楼】【前】【的】【松】【柏】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【可】【曾】【记】【得】【,】【晨】【光】【中】【的】【一】【群】【少】【年】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【脚】【步】【匆】【匆】【,】【眸】【子】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【课】【堂】【上】【,】【可】【爱】【的】【老】【师】【神】【采】【飞】【扬】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【带】【着】【我】【们】【遨】【游】【知】【识】【的】【殿】【堂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【什】【么】【更】【叫】【人】【惆】【怅】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【依】【靠】【几】【年】【的】【肩】【膀】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【背】【起】【了】【远】【方】【的】【行】【囊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【毕】【业】【的】【晚】【宴】【上】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【高】【高】【举】【起】【酒】【杯】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【痛】【饮】【离】【别】【的】【惆】【怅】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【美】【酒】【太】【过】【馨】【香】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【喝】【了】【一】【口】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【儿】【已】【进】【入】【梦】【乡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【。】【该】【上】【路】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【再】【次】【仔】【细】【看】【看】【你】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【再】【次】【为】【你】【背】【好】【行】【囊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【六】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【里】【满】【是】【惆】【怅】【的】【丁】【香】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【六】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【曙】【光】【…】【…】中英南京条约【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【对】【于】【曾】【经】【的】【我】【来】【说】【是】【一】【种】【可】【怕】【的】【存】【在】【。】【传】【说】【,】【初】【三】【的】【学】【生】【面】【对】【的】【是】【恶】【狼】【般】【让】【人】【无】【招】【架】【之】【力】【的】【考】【试】【、】【超】【级】【繁】【重】【的】【作】【业】【、】【硕】【大】【的】【书】【包】【,】【与】【两】【只】【有】【蔓】【延】【到】【下】【巴】【嫌】【疑】【的】【“】【熊】【猫】【眼】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【然】【,】【这】【种】【“】【传】【说】【”】【有】【夸】【大】【现】【实】【的】【嫌】【疑】【,】【不】【过】【若】【是】【去】【掉】【一】【些】【形】【容】【词】【,】【初】【三】【生】【活】【的】【轮】【廓】【已】【经】【基】【本】【呈】【现】【在】【你】【眼】【前】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刚】【刚】【步】【入】【初】【三】【的】【我】【,】【怀】【揣】【一】【颗】【紧】【张】【又】【十】【分】【期】【待】【的】【心】【,】【还】【算】【圆】【满】【地】【考】【完】【了】【第】【一】【次】【重】【要】【的】【考】【试】【—】【—】【摸】【底】【考】【。】【这】【次】【考】【试】【给】【了】【我】【一】【定】【的】【信】【心】【,】【让】【我】【对】【于】【“】【传】【说】【”】【的】【紧】【张】【感】【有】【了】【点】【点】【的】【平】【复】【。】【于】【是】【,】【在】【开】【学】【的】【头】【一】【个】【星】【期】【,】【我】【感】【觉】【一】【切】【都】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【第】【二】【周】【,】【作】【业】【量】【开】【始】【稳】【步】【上】【升】【,】【一】【个】【月】【过】【去】【了】【,】【作】【业】【和】【考】【试】【像】【沸】【水】【冒】【泡】【—】【样】【蜂】【拥】【而】【出】【,】【愈】【发】【勇】【猛】【。】【面】【对】【这】【些】【有】【着】【向】【“】【传】【说】【”】【发】【展】【趋】【势】【的】【情】【况】【,】【我】【终】【于】【意】【识】【到】【,】【初】【三】【生】【活】【可】【不】【是】【轻】【轻】【松】【松】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【由】【于】【按】【照】【以】【前】【的】【作】【息】【安】【排】【学】【习】【,】【我】【无】【法】【保】【证】【按】【时】【完】【成】【计】【划】【的】【内】【容】【,】【我】【每】【天】【不】【得】【不】【到】【凌】【晨】【才】【睡】【觉】【,】【时】【间】【一】【长】【,】【听】【课】【效】【率】【不】【如】【以】【前】【,】【最】【糟】【糕】【的】【是】【我】【的】【成】【绩】【开】【始】【有】【下】【滑】【的】【危】【险】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【了】【危】【机】【感】【的】【我】【开】【始】【做】【自】【我】【分】【析】【—】【—】【回】【家】【一】【定】【要】【先】【写】【作】【业】【,】【不】【能】【像】【原】【来】【那】【样】【先】【休】【息】【一】【会】【儿】【才】【动】【笔】【了】【;】【写】【作】【业】【的】【时】【候】【也】【不】【可】【以】【东】【摸】【摸】【西】【碰】【碰】【,】【一】【定】【要】【抓】【紧】【时】【间】【;】【平】【时】【在】【学】【校】【争】【取】【多】【完】【成】【些】【作】【业】【,】【这】【样】【回】【家】【学】【习】【的】【时】【间】【更】【多】【…】【…】【分】【析】【完】【毕】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【感】【叹】【:】【是】【要】【抓】【紧】【啊】【,】【根】【本】【没】【有】【时】【间】【容】【我】【休】【闲】【娱】【乐】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【及】【时】【的】【调】【整】【,】【让】【我】【阻】【止】【了】【成】【绩】【下】【滑】【的】【趋】【势】【,】【并】【且】【逐】【渐】【使】【成】【绩】【上】【升】【。】【这】【种】【上】【升】【是】【缓】【慢】【的】【,】【但】【在】【一】【段】【时】【间】【后】【,】【我】【终】【于】【掌】【握】【了】【规】【律】【,】【不】【再】【像】【刚】【开】【始】【那】【样】【成】【天】【困】【得】【睁】【不】【开】【眼】【,】【而】【是】【将】【时】【间】【以】【新】【的】【方】【式】【安】【排】【得】【游】【刃】【有】【余】【,】【不】【光】【按】【时】【完】【成】【每】【天】【应】【做】【的】【,】【还】【留】【出】【—】【部】【分】【时】【间】【让】【自】【己】【消】【化】【当】【天】【的】【知】【识】【,】【预】【习】【新】【的】【内】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【学】【期】【的】【题】【海】【战】【术】【让】【我】【被】【迫】【改】【变】【了】【舒】【适】【懒】【散】【的】【学】【习】【习】【惯】【,】【而】【改】【变】【后】【的】【我】【却】【得】【到】【了】【不】【少】【好】【处】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【学】【期】【开】【始】【了】【,】【我】【信】【心】【满】【怀】【地】【踏】【入】【校】【园】【,】【惊】【喜】【地】【发】【现】【这】【学】【期】【的】【作】【业】【量】【大】【大】【减】【少】【,】【不】【过】【都】【是】【留】【给】【我】【的】【自】【主】【复】【习】【时】【间】【。】【就】【在】【我】【以】【为】【初】【三】【生】【活】【可】【以】【有】【所】【放】【松】【的】【时】【候】【,】【体】【育】【老】【师】【又】【扔】【来】【一】【排】【响】【雷】【—】【—】【体】【育】【标】【准】【上】【升】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【对】【于】【体】【育】【不】【好】【的】【我】【来】【说】【是】【当】【头】【一】【棒】【,】【我】【痛】【下】【决】【心】【,】【不】【光】【回】【家】【要】【练】【体】【育】【,】【在】【学】【校】【,】【放】【学】【后】【也】【要】【练】【!】【于】【是】【,】【每】【天】【放】【学】【后】【,】【我】【都】【和】【几】【个】【同】【学】【—】【起】【到】【操】【场】【上】【奋】【力】【地】【练】【习】【,】【天】【快】【黑】【了】【才】【回】【家】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【的】【下】【学】【期】【,】【美】【术】【、】【音】【乐】【、】【外】【教】【…】【…】【都】【没】【有】【了】【,】【每】【天】【到】【学】【校】【就】【是】【全】【身】【心】【地】【投】【入】【学】【习】【和】【锻】【炼】【中】【去】【,】【然】【后】【带】【着】【一】【天】【的】【收】【获】【,】【回】【家】【再】【细】【细】【消】【化】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【看】【似】【非】【常】【累】【、】【非】【常】【枯】【燥】【,】【其】【实】【是】【可】【以】【提】【炼】【出】【丝】【丝】【乐】【趣】【的】【。】【要】【知】【道】【,】【累】【的】【不】【是】【我】【一】【个】【人】【,】【每】【个】【努】【力】【的】【同】【学】【都】【是】【一】【样】【的】【。】【在】【我】【们】【身】【边】【还】【有】【老】【师】【、】【家】【长】【在】【给】【我】【们】【鼓】【劲】【儿】【呢】【,】【想】【到】【这】【些】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【心】【里】【还】【是】【很】【愉】【快】【的】【。】【每】【天】【看】【着】【已】【经】【写】【完】【的】【作】【业】【、】【厚】【厚】【的】【笔】【记】【,】【成】【就】【感】【与】【自】【豪】【之】【情】【也】【是】【实】【实】【在】【在】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【的】【我】【早】【已】【从】【容】【看】【待】【初】【三】【生】【活】【了】【,】【初】【三】【生】【活】【就】【是】【这】【样】【的】【,】【虽】【苦】【犹】【甜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【三】【就】【像】【那】【浩】【瀚】【无】【垠】【的】【学】【海】【,】【我】【便】【如】【那】【只】【小】【舟】【,】【在】【时】【而】【惊】【涛】【骇】【浪】【,】【时】【而】【平】【静】【无】【波】【的】【学】【海】【中】【前】【行】【—】【—】【每】【天】【都】【是】【面】【对】【朝】【阳】【,】【意】【气】【风】【发】【,】【向】【着】【成】【功】【彼】【岸】【进】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【礼】【平】【)】

                    中英南京条约:郴州市迩到来气候多云拥有霈

                    【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【到】【初】【二】【,】【生】【活】【中】【尽】【是】【自】【豪】【、】【忧】【愁】【、】【感】【动】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【豪】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【晚】【自】【习】【一】【上】【课】【,】【老】【师】【便】【对】【上】【周】【的】【作】【业】【进】【行】【点】【评】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【日】【记】【得】【A】【+】【的】【同】【学】【请】【起】【立】【!】【”】【“】【A】【+】【”】【是】【最】【高】【等】【级】【,】【这】【不】【有】【我】【吗】【,】【我】【“】【刷】【”】【地】【一】【下】【站】【了】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【师】【数】【了】【数】【人】【数】【,】【赞】【许】【地】【点】【点】【头】【,】【接】【着】【说】【:】【“】【好】【,】【请】【坐】【。】【再】【请】【日】【记】【书】【写】【加】【分】【的】【同】【学】【起】【立】【。】【”】【我】【刚】【要】【准】【备】【坐】【下】【,】【看】【着】【自】【己】【本】【子】【上】【写】【着】【“】【书】【写】【+】【5】【分】【”】【,】【我】【又】【像】【弹】【簧】【一】【样】【立】【刻】【把】【弯】【着】【的】【腰】【挺】【直】【,】【心】【里】【美】【滋】【滋】【的】【。】【老】【师】【环】【视】【一】【周】【,】【两】【眼】【笑】【成】【了】【一】【条】【线】【,】【又】【开】【口】【道】【:】【“】【请】【坐】【!】【请】【日】【记】【字】【数】【过】【二】【十】【行】【的】【同】【学】【起】【立】【!】【”】【还】【有】【我】【,】【我】【挺】【胸】【抬】【头】【,】【从】【头】【到】【脚】【散】【发】【着】【喜】【悦】【和】【自】【豪】【。】【心】【里】【默】【默】【地】【说】【:】【“】【三】【次】【了】【,】【三】【次】【了】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【站】【起】【来】【三】【次】【的】【同】【学】【,】【请】【举】【手】【。】【”】【老】【师】【清】【了】【清】【嗓】【子】【数】【着】【:】【“】【一】【、】【二】【、】【三】【,】【三】【个】【同】【学】【。】【祝】【贺】【你】【们】【!】【加】【油】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【光】【荣】【地】【举】【着】【手】【,】【此】【刻】【,】【我】【感】【觉】【自】【己】【似】【乎】【是】【万】【众】【瞩】【目】【的】【焦】【点】【,】【有】【多】【少】【人】【正】【在】【羡】【慕】【地】【看】【着】【我】【。】【我】【高】【兴】【地】【使】【劲】【儿】【抿】【住】【嘴】【,】【生】【怕】【不】【小】【心】【笑】【出】【了】【声】【音】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【谁】【说】【初】【二】【的】【日】【子】【单】【调】【乏】【味】【,】【那】【是】【因】【为】【我】【们】【没】【有】【真】【正】【去】【享】【受】【它】【的】【精】【彩】【和】【收】【获】【辛】【苦】【后】【的】【快】【乐】【与】【喜】【悦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【忧】【愁】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【愁】【啊】【,】【愁】【啊】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【哎】【,】【你】【这】【次】【考】【试】【考】【得】【咋】【样】【啊】【?】【进】【步】【了】【没】【?】【”】【“】【唉】【,】【别】【提】【了】【,】【还】【进】【步】【?】【我】【能】【原】【地】【踏】【步】【走】【就】【已】【经】【很】【不】【错】【了】【。】【”】【“】【你】【呢】【?】【”】【“】【我】【就】【更】【不】【用】【提】【了】【呗】【!】【一】【路】【坐】【滑】【梯】【,】【一】【点】【儿】【阻】【碍】【都】【没】【有】【啊】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【唉】【,】【这】【可】【咋】【办】【啊】【?】【回】【家】【肯】【定】【是】【暴】【风】【骤】【雨】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【就】【是】【,】【就】【是】【,】【我】【爸】【妈】【要】【看】【到】【我】【这】【成】【绩】【,】【非】【气】【炸】【了】【不】【可】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【嗯】【!】【这】【考】【试】【啊】【,】【就】【是】【一】【颗】【定】【时】【炸】【弹】【,】【随】【时】【都】【会】【爆】【啊】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【周】【末】【了】【,】【大】【家】【一】【点】【儿】【高】【兴】【的】【感】【觉】【也】【没】【有】【,】【反】【而】【害】【怕】【下】【课】【的】【铃】【声】【响】【起】【,】【担】【心】【父】【母】【无】【休】【止】【地】【盘】【问】【,】【更】【恐】【惧】【与】【老】【师】【单】【独】【谈】【话】【时】【可】【怕】【的】【沉】【默】【。】【同】【学】【们】【都】【为】【这】【样】【的】【日】【子】【烦】【恼】【、】【忧】【愁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【感】【动】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【紧】【张】【的】【学】【习】【之】【余】【,】【我】【们】【迎】【来】【了】【精】【彩】【轻】【松】【的】【校】【运】【动】【会】【,】【参】【加】【接】【力】【赛】【的】【同】【学】【全】【副】【武】【装】【,】【各】【自】【做】【着】【准】【备】【,】【我】【更】【是】【严】【阵】【以】【待】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【啪】【”】【,】【一】【声】【枪】【响】【,】【第】【一】【棒】【似】【离】【弦】【的】【箭】【,】【射】【了】【出】【去】【。】【紧】【接】【着】【第】【二】【棒】【,】【第】【三】【棒】【…】【…】【轮】【到】【我】【了】【,】【我】【接】【过】【棒】【向】【终】【点】【冲】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【终】【于】【跑】【下】【来】【了】【,】【可】【口】【干】【舌】【燥】【,】【眼】【前】【发】【黑】【,】【我】【一】【下】【倒】【在】【了】【草】【坪】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【娇】【娇】【马】【上】【跑】【过】【来】【,】【把】【我】【扶】【起】【。】【用】【娇】【小】【的】【身】【躯】【摇】【摇】【晃】【晃】【地】【搀】【扶】【着】【我】【来】【到】【教】【室】【,】【端】【来】【水】【,】【帮】【我】【捶】【腿】【揉】【背】【,】【还】【不】【时】【地】【给】【我】【擦】【汗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【好】【幸】【福】【,】【她】【的】【一】【举】【一】【动】【让】【我】【感】【动】【。】【我】【们】【不】【是】【最】【要】【好】【的】【朋】【友】【,】【甚】【至】【平】【时】【因】【为】【各】【自】【忙】【于】【学】【习】【而】【忽】【略】【彼】【此】【,】【而】【她】【却】【在】【我】【最】【需】【要】【照】【顾】【、】【需】【要】【帮】【助】【的】【时】【候】【来】【照】【顾】【我】【,】【关】【心】【我】【。】【这】【就】【是】【初】【二】【的】【同】【学】【,】【就】【是】【他】【们】【给】【我】【无】【尽】【的】【感】【动】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【都】【说】【初】【二】【是】【辛】【苦】【的】【,】【充】【满】【酸】【甜】【苦】【辣】【的】【,】【而】【在】【我】【看】【来】【,】【除】【了】【辛】【苦】【,】【还】【有】【许】【多】【令】【人】【惊】【喜】【的】【快】【乐】【和】【感】【动】【,】【精】【彩】【和】【绚】【烂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【标】【题】【的】【设】【计】【使】【文】【章】【的】【结】【构】【条】【理】【清】【晰】【。】【文】【字】【虽】【显】【稚】【嫩】【但】【却】【令】【人】【欣】【喜】【。】【都】【说】【初】【二】【是】【辛】【苦】【的】【,】【但】【是】【我】【们】【的】【同】【学】【却】【在】【紧】【张】【的】【间】【隙】【发】【现】【了】【生】【活】【的】【精】【彩】【和】【感】【动】【,】【令】【人】【欣】【喜】【又】【欣】【慰】【。】【虽】【然】【学】【习】【单】【调】【,】【但】【是】【同】【学】【们】【能】【够】【以】【自】【己】【的】【发】【现】【记】【录】【学】【习】【的】【快】【乐】【,】【作】【文】【就】【是】【这】【样】【写】【成】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【吕】【桂】【贞】【)】中英南京条约【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【晚】【自】【习】【的】【铃】【声】【响】【过】【后】【,】【教】【室】【里】【一】【片】【寂】【静】【。】【不】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【灯】【光】【突】【然】【熄】【灭】【,】【安】【静】【的】【教】【室】【里】【响】【起】【了】【同】【学】【们】【的】【欢】【呼】【声】【。】【很】【快】【,】【班】【主】【任】【的】【声】【音】【从】【外】【面】【传】【了】【进】【来】【,】【大】【家】【立】【即】【做】【出】【要】【抓】【紧】【时】【间】【学】【习】【的】【样】【子】【—】【—】【在】【抽】【屉】【里】【翻】【寻】【蜡】【烛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【别】【忙】【,】【”】【老】【师】【进】【来】【温】【和】【地】【说】【,】【“】【先】【唱】【支】【歌】【吧】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【好】【呀】【!】【”】【大】【家】【立】【即】【响】【应】【,】【于】【是】【,】【一】【场】【别】【开】【生】【面】【的】【歌】【会】【在】【黑】【暗】【中】【开】【始】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【始】【是】【女】【声】【合】【唱】【,】【歌】【声】【极】【其】【优】【美】【,】【男】【同】【胞】【们】【静】【静】【地】【听】【着】【,】【生】【怕】【不】【小】【心】【弄】【出】【一】【点】【声】【响】【,】【歌】【声】【就】【会】【戛】【然】【而】【止】【。】【等】【到】【男】【生】【唱】【歌】【时】【,】【他】【们】【却】【什】【么】【歌】【都】【唱】【不】【完】【整】【。】【于】【是】【,】【老】【师】【想】【了】【个】【办】【法】【,】【叫】【男】【生】【背】【诵】【《】【沁】【园】【春】【·】【雪】【》】【,】【“】【北】【国】【风】【光】【,】【千】【里】【冰】【封】【…】【…】【”】【声】【音】【很】【洪】【亮】【,】【也】【很】【整】【齐】【,】【可】【我】【们】【听】【着】【感】【觉】【仍】【不】【对】【劲】【,】【最】【后】【,】【老】【师】【也】【忍】【不】【住】【笑】【起】【来】【了】【,】【他】【们】【连】【读】【书】【也】【走】【调】【哇】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【黑】【暗】【中】【谁】【也】【看】【不】【见】【谁】【,】【但】【青】【春】【的】【歌】【声】【在】【教】【室】【里】【四】【处】【荡】【漾】【。】【每】【个】【人】【的】【烦】【恼】【,】【似】【乎】【都】【被】【黑】【暗】【吞】【没】【了】【,】【留】【下】【的】【只】【有】【青】【春】【的】【欢】【乐】【。】【欢】【声】【笑】【语】【在】【教】【室】【里】【飘】【过】【来】【飘】【过】【去】【,】【久】【久】【不】【息】【…】【…】【大】【家】【万】【分】【珍】【惜】【这】【难】【得】【的】【空】【闲】【:】【醒】【醒】【脑】【子】【,】【洗】【洗】【思】【想】【,】【我】【还】【听】【见】【两】【个】【同】【学】【在】【唱】【歌】【的】【间】【隙】【互】【道】【“】【对】【不】【起】【”】【“】【没】【关】【系】【”】【呢】【!】【窗】【外】【虽】【然】【寒】【风】【阵】【阵】【,】【我】【们】【的】【教】【室】【里】【却】【是】【暖】【意】【融】【融】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【偶】【尔】【过】【往】【汽】【车】【的】【灯】【光】【在】【窗】【前】【一】【闪】【,】【我】【们】【便】【会】【紧】【张】【起】【来】【,】【生】【怕】【亮】【光】【重】【现】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【尽】【管】【我】【们】【十】【二】【万】【分】【的】【不】【情】【愿】【,】【明】【晃】【晃】【的】【灯】【光】【还】【是】【赶】【走】【了】【这】【难】【得】【的】【黑】【暗】【。】【它】【带】【着】【歉】【意】【,】【张】【大】【眼】【睛】【看】【着】【教】【室】【里】【重】【又】【静】【心】【苦】【读】【的】【学】【子】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【至】【今】【,】【我】【还】【常】【常】【想】【起】【那】【晚】【上】【短】【暂】【的】【黑】【暗】【,】【想】【起】【黑】【暗】【中】【那】【由】【歌】【声】【织】【成】【的】【欢】【乐】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【的】【主】【要】【亮】【点】【是】【:】【其】【一】【,】【取】【材】【于】【校】【园】【生】【活】【,】【真】【实】【而】【典】【型】【。】【对】【于】【校】【园】【生】【活】【,】【许】【多】【同】【学】【都】【感】【觉】【到】【平】【淡】【乏】【味】【,】【难】【以】【成】【文】【。】【然】【而】【小】【作】【者】【能】【够】【用】【心】【去】【观】【察】【校】【园】【生】【活】【,】【并】【有】【意】【识】【地】【从】【校】【园】【生】【活】【中】【挖】【掘】【写】【作】【素】【材】【,】【用】【一】【颗】【经】【过】【熏】【陶】【的】【心】【去】【发】【现】【校】【园】【生】【活】【的】【美】【,】【抒】【写】【了】【她】【爱】【学】【校】【、】【爱】【生】【活】【的】【情】【感】【,】【这】【是】【难】【能】【可】【贵】【的】【。】【其】【二】【,】【构】【思】【新】【颖】【,】【平】【中】【见】【奇】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【,】【宁】【吃】【鲜】【桃】【一】【口】【,】【不】【吃】【烂】【杏】【一】【篓】【。】【这】【说】【明】【作】【文】【的】【选】【材】【要】【独】【特】【。】【立】【意】【要】【别】【具】【匠】【心】【,】【力】【求】【凸】【显】【时】【代】【精】【神】【。】【校】【园】【生】【活】【虽】【然】【多】【姿】【多】【彩】【,】【选】【材】【角】【度】【也】【多】【种】【多】【样】【,】【可】【写】【出】【新】【意】【却】【并】【非】【易】【事】【。】【小】【作】【者】【以】【独】【到】【的】【眼】【力】【,】【记】【叙】【晚】【自】【习】【停】【电】【后】【,】【黑】【暗】【中】【的】【一】【场】【别】【开】【生】【面】【的】【“】【歌】【会】【”】【,】【展】【现】【了】【一】【道】【瑰】【丽】【的】【“】【校】【园】【风】【景】【线】【”】【,】【表】【现】【出】【了】【不】【凡】【的】【选】【材】【功】【夫】【。】【此】【外】【,】【文】【章】【主】【题】【鲜】【明】【,】【结】【构】【清】【晰】【,】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【情】【感】【真】【挚】【,】【确】【是】【一】【篇】【值】【得】【同】【学】【们】【借】【鉴】【的】【成】【功】【佳】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【王】【代】【福】【)】

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